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fenlings ([personal profile] fenlings) wrote in [personal profile] anoel 2007-02-05 10:37 am (UTC)

Oh, this was well-done, and I enjoyed it. I liked the POV changing with the voices. I especially liked how you intercut the different scenes in Justin's part. Nice.

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