Poem

[anoel]

So reading poetry often inspires me to want to write some. Here's something I wrote today at work:

If I,
say,
Gave and Helped and
Praised
Would you
Acknowledge, Like, Approve
But no.

You couldn't.
How could you?
You do not see.
Or reply or want or
love
Like I do.

~Ashley

Comments

[rudelypinioned.livejournal.com]

Ohh, I like. Especially the disjointed effect with the short lines.

[anoel.livejournal.com]

Glad you like it :)